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Post by sadrain on Dec 28, 2007 20:47:30 GMT
"Ah, let me be the judge of that. You never think your stories are good. it's author illness - they think that their stories are perfect but aactually they are terrbile or they think they aren't really good but actually they are amazing. And remember that no story have ever pleased everyone," Katlyn smiled.
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Post by Ellie on Dec 28, 2007 20:53:10 GMT
Dia smiled. "Alright. Here you go. Please read it." she said, handing it to Katlyn, then biting her lip in anticipation.
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Post by sadrain on Dec 29, 2007 2:22:21 GMT
Katlyn started to read the story hasitly. She was fast reader but no detail passed her unnoticed as she runt trough pages. She was drown in the story and once someone had joked that Katlyn would not feel like that bomb exploded next to her while she was reading. For hat he had gotten some pretty painful bruises. Katlyn was afraid of anything exploding. Sometimes she seemed to fear even open fire. But only sometimes and only if it was large.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 2, 2008 3:55:41 GMT
(... She would hate Fiera...)
Dia waited anxiously for her to finish, nervously playing with her fingers or biting her lip.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 2, 2008 19:26:39 GMT
(Well.. Katlyn isn't really able to hate anyone. Besides, she would understand that Fiera isn't big danger for her. Or it could happen, after she... Okay, I am quiet.) (What is the story about. Maybe you can give me main lines? If not, I will post then.)
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Post by Ellie on Jan 4, 2008 2:58:47 GMT
(Um... I haven't actually written it yet. But it's about a girl -named Diamond- who's grandmother was a famous storyteller, and Di inherited the gift. That's pretty much all I got so far... *blushes*)
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Post by sadrain on Jan 4, 2008 9:51:50 GMT
(That's enough! *hugs*)
"Well, I think it's good. Few grammar mistakes, few style problems but I think you have a good start. There isn't almsot anything to correct, just keep going," Katlyn smiled as gave story back to Di. "I think everyone who can write stories like these are lucky, inside or out of story."
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Post by Ellie on Jan 5, 2008 22:29:42 GMT
Dia looked down at the story Katlyn had handed her. Then she smiled brightly and hugged Katlyn happily. "Yay!!! Thank you!"
As always, she was overly relieved at Katlyn's reaction.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 5, 2008 23:04:36 GMT
"Weel, you know I am true about this, always," Katlyn laughed as hugged Dia back.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 6, 2008 3:18:07 GMT
Dia smiled then looked back to the book, letting go of Katlyn. "So, where are the mistakes?" she asked, flipping through the pages.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 6, 2008 3:37:37 GMT
Katlyn showed her the small mistakes she had found with smile. Sometimes she didn't feel right to judge Dia's writings as she wrote nothing, only read but if Dia didn't mind, she enjoyed this small job.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 6, 2008 3:39:54 GMT
Dia accepted the help thankfully, and corrected all the mistakes Katlyn had found, and even some Katlyn hadn't found.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 6, 2008 3:57:04 GMT
"Well," Katlyn looked to skies. "I need to go home. Or sle mom will be worried," she stood up with smile. "This was great day."
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Post by Ellie on Jan 6, 2008 4:05:53 GMT
Dia stood up with her. "Indeed. Well, see you tomorrow. At school?"
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Post by sadrain on Jan 6, 2008 4:12:13 GMT
"I am not intending to disapear in mysterious adventure like heroines from your stories so I belive we shall meet tomorrw, indeed. At school. Or sooner." Katlyn grinned and rushed away.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 6, 2008 4:21:25 GMT
Dia grinned back, and turned to walk away.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 6, 2008 15:51:22 GMT
Behind trees was faint glow of light. it slowly came closer and closer but it would nto be hard to miss it.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 7, 2008 22:01:02 GMT
Dia saw the light, and, curious as always, she walked toward it.
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Post by sadrain on Jan 8, 2008 16:04:40 GMT
The light become brighter, reflecting on still frozen trees, made it all look quite spooky. it was like behind trees would be gigantic bonfire, giving light to everything around.
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Post by Ellie on Jan 8, 2008 16:40:12 GMT
Dia began to feel excited, and went closer.
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